East 63
Written to help pitch East 63; a multi-million dollar residential building in Melbourne CBD.
Background
Refining the luxury tone of voice.
East 63 is a high end residential building in Melbourne CBD. Because it is set in a luxury precinct and is focused on appealing to either a strategic, asset focused or legacy focused buyer, it makes sense to look to the luxury brands in the east to draw inspiration from and to align East63 with those brands via positive connotation.
Profiles
Because it is set in a luxury precinct and is focused on appealing to either a strategic, asset focused or legacy focused buyer, it makes sense to look to the luxury brands in the east to draw inspiration from and to align East63 with those brands via positive connotation. There are a variety of tones and subsets for luxury brands, these are the ones that are likely to best suit the campaign:
The storyteller.
FIJI Water aims to bring luxury to essentials such as water with long, wandering sentences and a sense of story, wonder and narrative in their marketing.
On a remote Pacific island, 1,600 miles from the nearest continent, equatorial trade winds purify the clouds that begin FIJI® Water’s journey through one of the world’s last virgin ecosystems.
The poet.
This is similar to the storyteller but with more lyrical flair in its luxury brand world, and a focus on the senses and emotions of the narrative. A good example of this is Aesop.
Our gifts for the home help instil aromatic calm in treasured spaces, marking a departure from the external world into a more soothing private realm.
Utilises quotes from famous and classy people. Aesop uses Shakespeare, East63 could use high profile investors, Melbourne celebrities or architects.
The minimalist
Understated, pared back, no personality, neutral, appeals to a wide audience.
East63. Eastern Elegance.
A couple of examples of these subtypes in use:
Storyteller:
Melbourne has held an iconic position on the world’s cultural stage for 186 years. East Sixty Three is an unrepeatable development opportunity taking its place in the history of architectural elegance in Melbourne. Claim your exclusive stake in grandeur, location and legacy now.
Minimalist:
East Sixty Three. Unbeatable eastern elegance.
Or
East Sixty Three. Your new Melbourne landmark never to be repeated.
Subtypes that are unlikely to work well for East Sixty Three
The Butler
Asprey is a good example of this. A formal tone is the order of the day for many premium brands, particularly British ones. From British Airways (‘To fly, to serve’) to upmarket heritage brands like Asprey, the Butler is a steady default.
It’s old-fashioned, sure, but a lot of people like that. When buying into old-fashioned luxury, one expects to be addressed accordingly.
- Not modern
- Stuffy and dated
- Doesn’t fit with the design motifs
The Joker.
This subtype focuses on jokes, word plays and cleverness to gain appeal. A good example of this is Jaguar, saying “We already know you want one.” Suggested taglines such as “Tall or nothing” and “Not another tall tale” also fit into this subtype.
This is less likely to appeal to high end buyers and investors, who are looking for class and facts. It is difficult to nail this kind of personality without a strong brand behind it, and it is probably best to stick to simple, clear cut or poetic language.
Samples
Example 1: Brochure Copy
“Architecture should speak of its time and place, but yearn for timelessness.” - Frank Gehry
Paris, New York, London. These cities are shaped by their culture, luxury brands, and most importantly by their renowned buildings. East Sixty Three is a development opportunity that can never be repeated, and one which will leave an indelible mark on Melbourne in its leafy East end. JLL are pleased to present the upcoming sale of 63 Exhibition Street, Melbourne.
Unrivalled in exclusivity, location, design and potential cultural relevance, the 52 floor building will turn heads and attract residents and guests from the world over. Inspired by hotels and residencies of significance around the world, East Sixty Three will join their ranks and set a new benchmark for elegance and quality with its legacy.
Example 2: Render Copy
Elevated Eastern Elegance.
A building that is the last of its kind must leave the most exceptional legacy.
East Sixty Three is about to make its mark on Melbourne’s landscape with a never to be repeated permit, and a height of 182.6m. It is a rare opportunity, as it is one of just 4 buildings between 5,000 and 20,000 sqm in the Eastern Core. It will soar to 52 floors comprising both residential and hotel suites. The simple yet notable design reflects the sunlight to dazzle and impress.
Type
Advertising Copy
Area
Real Estate
Location
Melbourne
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